commercialized, handle me with care
Wednesday, January 14, 2004
The following review has been submitted to: The Blessings of Liberty Chapter: 3
The only thing I don't like about the story is that the author keeps on throwing in
"you" instead of a random character name - without directly saying who "you" is.
is it really that hard? is it? if one of you kids will tell me that the story is confusingly written, i would happily make edits. i'd believe that version of events over my current hypothesis that people are really stupid. but i just don't think i should have to spell things out for you. i mean, yes, i *could* write "CJ POV!!! PlEaSe R&R!!1one!1!1" but. i don't know. i'm not making it intentionally hard, here, but... yeah.
< /rant >
posted by ~renata~ at 9:21 PM
(0) commented with care
best thing i've ever found
still have some love to give